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Astral's avatar

Phenomenal!!!!!

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Billionaire Psycho's avatar

My favorite part of the story:

"“Right,” said Ashley, “what if he even took your advice? He’d crash and burn, lose what little he has, and go walk into one of those suicide booths. And probably leave all his credits to Bianca the Bitch. Pin to Idea Board.”

“Ooooo, or maybe he succeeds against all odds?” said Helen, “disappears into the world, goes away and makes a fabulous fortune, comes back in 10 years dressed to kill and looking for Bianca? But finds her happily married with kids and he goes right back out and walks into a suicide booth? Pin to Idea Board.”

All the girls giggled at that one."

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Billionaire Psycho's avatar

Excellent plot twist at the end, very surprising.

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Bones's avatar

Ha ha thank you! I originally wanted to make Bianca evil so she’d deserve what she got but ended up liking her

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